I'm liking the main panel here! I'm thinking it's probably the best composition you've done so far in this series. Great work.
(the last panels a little dodgy though )

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..a life lived in fear is a life half lived..

Its one of my lest favorite pages, though she does look adorable in that panel

Waiiit it just occured to me that you have not commented since the old version of chapter 1, have you been keeping up? ^.^

It's the slight lean and curve of the body that i like, it adds a real human/comfort dimention to the character. Nice one!

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Yeah, i've been reading along I tend to keep an eye on comics of this genera (for obvious reasons) and yours is definitely the most promising that's come along in a while. Your characters are well written and easy to empathise with and you actually seem to have a definite direction for the storyline (something so many 'trans' related webcomics tend to lack).
Your artwork is definitely improving from the early stuff (particularly your colouring) and more importantly, it has it's own flavor and style (so many of these comics tend to feel 'samey'
Great stuff! I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take it

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aww the big picture of her is cute^_^
very cuddly, probly the only time you see that too XD

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please i'm trying to find people to draw what they see when they read these [link] please contact me for information, and if your interested.....which i hope you are

sooo you keep track of some people that coment or ummm anyway the first panel is cute XD

yes I remember many of the names that come across my deviantart.

Thanks !