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Between the Lines Chap2pg26 by ~MEKAREX:iconMEKAREX:


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Only one page this update, there is only one page left in this chapter and I want to give Bryce more time to give me the pages for chapter 3. I do not want there to be such a large gap of time between chapter 2 and 3

Between the Lines
Chapter 2:Shay
Page 26

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Hmmmm....

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"If you meet the Buddha, kill the Buddha." - Lin Chi
aww...poor shay...

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I'm gone, have a good life^_^
Mostly I had to reread the beginning of the chapter to catch the linkage to the last panel. After the amount of time from then to now, I kinda forgot that the chapter is a flashback. When read in one sitting, the flow is much more natural.

I also noticed your use the dodge tool in this particular comic, particularly on Shay's face in panel 4. I was wondering if the smaller brush was a stylistic choice or not. I always tend to use bigger, fuzzy brushes for my airbrushing.

I didn't want to bring this up without being invited since I didn't want to be overbearing.

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"If you meet the Buddha, kill the Buddha." - Lin Chi
thats what deviantart is for, I believe, level headed critiques lol but yes that is a mess up and i'll correct it when I can.
i luv the bottom panel its neat :)
Sometimes you forget this was a flashback.

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"The ability to speak does not make you intelligent." - Qui-Gon Gin (StarWars: Ep.1)

"I believe time is relative, but that's probably because my VCR won't stop flashing 12:00." - Original Quote

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