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White-Ash preview pg2 by ~MEKAREX:iconMEKAREX:

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©2008 ~MEKAREX
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Submitted: April 25
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Here's page 2 ^.^

If you want to find out more about the White-Ash series then search my gallery! =P

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~Roxio41-50:iconRoxio41-50: Apr 26, 2008, 5:57:47 AM
I agree with the red one.
(First comment! :w00t!:)

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~tessmonsta:icontessmonsta: May 4, 2008, 6:35:28 AM
You know, looking back at this page from the third one, I've noticed I missed the blur effect in panel 2. That explains why I was somewhat confused by panel 4.

I always have a problem with battle scenes because there never seems to be enough panels to describe all the motions. ^^;

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~MEKAREX:iconMEKAREX: May 4, 2008, 8:55:33 AM
I did have a bit of trouble with it.
~tessmonsta:icontessmonsta: May 4, 2008, 12:17:13 PM
Maybe it would be better if you added a few extra panels? Maybe another page, reusing the panels you have now so you don't lose any work?

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~MEKAREX:iconMEKAREX: May 4, 2008, 12:31:10 PM
the trouble I had was with proper panel composition for the fight, all that happend in the fight was that June jumped at Akka, Akka used her essence to move fast to the side and she whacked June in the back of the neck and June's head hit the rock that Akka was standing on in the first page.
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